Wednesday evening, March 8, 9 pm

Greetings!

Below you will find a copy of the Proofreading Handout I distributed and chatted about today in class.

A note to section 7 students...unfortunately you ended up having five minutes LESS than the other three classes to complete the In Class Writing Response this morning. I will definitely take that into consideration when I score your responses.

As you know, we will be watching episode 5 in class on Friday. Just so there is no misunderstanding, those who miss the viewing are still responsible for making it up before the next class session. :-)

See you Friday!

English 20

DOES PROOFREADING MATTER???
(yes!!!)

See below:

Therefore, this was a huge contribution towards the world of science, and it helped increase are knowledge of our world even further, because it might be just the key factor to knowing how our universe came to evolve and how living each day was not meaningless, but was for a certain purpose for human beings to solve.

Michael also was the first to start the real importance in making good music videos, and not just any music video a movie based music video.

Although this logical movement is well known to take place during the 1800’s, its roots go back to the time of when Galileo became to rise to become a nonconformist.

Under Queen Elizabeth’s thrown, and under the church, non tolerance took place and anyone disobeying or thinking of anything besides the Church’s teachings.

As through his findings and experiments he found many facts and details that have shaped what science, philosophy, history and art is today, but even so, he will always be remembered as going against authority and becoming and nonconformist as he believed differently then what the Church of England told its society to do.

Lastly, in today’s society it is as much accepted, as is rejected, to be a homosexual.

The way she presents herself and the things she supports in make her that way.

Martin Luther grew up in a nice home in Germany.

Before coming to California he first found himself in Baltimore where he was accepted into a high school for his art and thats where he was really able to interact with and understand everyone as they are humans.